The Story Of A Girl Poem by Chandini Jaswal

The Story Of A Girl

Rating: 3.8


Prison-ed in the four walls of this room,
Waiting for a magical broom.

So that I need not weep,
Or go on sweep.

And tightly hug mom and dad,
And behave like I'm still a lad.

Oh no! The mistress is here,
And I'm in fear.

Here is the duster, there is the rubber,
I need to hurry up or I won't get supper.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This was my first poem which wrote after getting inspiration from Cinderella's story.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Walker 24 November 2019

This is the mindset of a fearful servant girl, so well expressed from her point of view.

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Chandini Jaswal 24 November 2019

Many thanks sir for your kind words

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Aradhika Sharma 04 July 2016

Very sweet poem! How nice of the poet to empathise with Cinderella....like a real fairy godmother!

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Chandini Jaswal 06 July 2016

Thank you so much Aradhika Aunty!

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 September 2015

Oh no! The mistress is here, And I'm in fear. I need to hurry up or I won't get supper. fear, anxiety, cautiousness you express a lot of feelings and emotions here thank you very much. a nice poem

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Chandini Jaswal 27 September 2015

Thank you Sir! Delighted to know that you like it.

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Nikita Dutt 28 August 2013

This one is so amazing. Have no words to describe it..! Thank you for sharing it with us.

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Chandini Jaswal 01 July 2016

Thank you Nikita didi!

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Soulful Heart 04 August 2013

nice try, ..... keep writing., .

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Chandini Jaswal 01 July 2016

Thank you so much! Glad to know that you liked my poem!

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