Raihana Abdul Jabbar

Rookie - 404 Points (13/07/1992)

My Love... - Poem by Raihana Abdul Jabbar

Dreams spinned away,
Silvery webs around me...
Drifted, I amidst them,
When a rustle woke me up...

As the graceful 'sleep fairy',
Refused to grant a spell...
Stepped I, lightly onto the balcony...
Feeling the 'magic' around me...

The breeze fetched me,
The fragrance of wild jasmine blooms....
Surprized at the supressed giggle,
I stared at the perky red rose on the sill...

She whispered 'Up there! He's up there! '
My eyes searched for him,
The starry black sky...
And instantly fell in love!

There, among the cotton clouds,
Winking down at me,
Was the handsome, elegant prince,
My love, The Moon...


Comments about My Love... by Raihana Abdul Jabbar

  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (9/11/2014 3:13:00 PM)

    True love is the key about life; bringing peace to all.

    E.K.L.
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  • Dr Library @ DebadarshiDr Library @ Debadarshi (8/4/2012 9:16:00 AM)

    I must say sister, keep writing... U have a good hand at the nature.... (Report)Reply

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  • Rachel Ann Butler (10/11/2009 1:42:00 AM)

    Was the handsome, elegant prince,


    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • john v (10/26/2008 10:17:00 AM)

    love arouse in my heart
    for an great piece of art

    written with a great imagintion
    it made permanent stay in my heart's junction

    i cant think or write anymore
    for there is nothin but your poem in my poetic store
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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/25/2008 5:58:00 AM)

    It's amazing Raihana.
    Cute poem.
    Love it with my 10.
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  • Hana KHana K (10/11/2008 5:50:00 PM)

    wow
    agree with Sarwar Chowdhury!
    i fall in love with this poem! ! !
    this's beautiful! ! !
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  • C T Heart (10/11/2008 9:29:00 AM)

    A love in a midnight sky, beautiful imagery used. Well crafted a 10. (Report)Reply

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  • Hazem Al JaberHazem Al Jaber (10/11/2008 5:56:00 AM)

    beautiful...you penned it as well..
    keep on
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 11, 2008



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