Sayeed Abubakar

Gold Star - 16,889 Points (21 September 1972 / Jessore / Bangladesh)

My Moon - Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

Never love came to me so deep,
Never love came to me so high;
Now without you I cannot sleep,
Without your love now I do die
As a fish dies without water,
As a tree can't live without soil.
O my Love, Nature's cute daughter,
Without you now all my dreams spoil.

The Moon now looks ugly and fake
As I have got you, o my Moon;
There is now no beautiful lake,
Beautiful sea and fair monsoon,
All the beauties of Nature break
Looking at your face, o my Moon.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This sonnet is written on Sunday, August 26,2012 for my sweet love Lorena

Comments about My Moon by Sayeed Abubakar

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (12/8/2012 3:32:00 AM)

    Lovely love poem... very simple reflection of a great poet... (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (1/4/2016 7:30:00 AM)

    An excellent comment. Thank you very much.

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  • Scarlett Outlaw (11/14/2012 8:34:00 AM)

    Oh My Goodness! ! This poem is REALLY, REALLY deep, you should be really chuffed! (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (1/4/2016 7:31:00 AM)

    Really very nice words from your mouth. Thanks a lot, dear poet.

  • Hazel Durham (11/13/2012 10:06:00 AM)

    A beautiful heartfelt poem with great rhythm and flow. Inspired write! (Report) Reply

    Sayeed Abubakar (1/4/2016 7:31:00 AM)

    I am inspired too by your speech.

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 5, 2014

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