My Moon Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

My Moon

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Never love came to me so deep,
Never love came to me so high;
Now without you I cannot sleep,
Without your love now I do die
As a fish dies without water,
As a tree can't live without soil.
O my Love, Nature's cute daughter,
Without you now all my dreams spoil.

The Moon now looks ugly and fake
As I have got you, o my Moon;
There is now no beautiful lake,
Beautiful sea and fair monsoon,
All the beauties of Nature break
Looking at your face, o my Moon.

Saturday, August 25, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This sonnet is written on Sunday, August 26,2012 for my sweet love Lorena
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

Lovely love poem... very simple reflection of a great poet...

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Sayeed Abubakar 04 January 2016

An excellent comment. Thank you very much.

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Scarlett Outlaw 14 November 2012

Oh My Goodness! ! This poem is REALLY, REALLY deep, you should be really chuffed!

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Sayeed Abubakar 04 January 2016

Really very nice words from your mouth. Thanks a lot, dear poet.

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Hazel Durham 13 November 2012

A beautiful heartfelt poem with great rhythm and flow. Inspired write!

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Sayeed Abubakar 04 January 2016

I am inspired too by your speech.

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Jessore / Bangladesh
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