My Pretty Pet Poem by Vijay Sai R

My Pretty Pet

Rating: 3.8


My pet cat puzy,
is always busy.
She drinks milk aplenty,
whenever she feels hungry.
Bird watching is her hobby,
which she does regularly.
She is very happy,
when she catches prey occasionally.
Of course, she hides herself skillfully,
until she finishes off completely.
She looks so pretty,
whenever she gazes innocently.
Her friend is Tweeny,
who is so lovely.
They come together at play,
to chase all the mice away!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret Haig 06 July 2012

you have done well, the mood shows and I can feel how the cat is feeling, and I can picture how the cat could sit low hiding and watching carefully for birds.. well done, where in india do you live, in north or south and how is the weather over there, maybe you could write a poem describing your home as well.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 July 2012

very nice.wish i could have a cat like yours.sweet drop.keep inking Vijay.

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Mazwi Sedibe 05 July 2012

Hey how do you complement a good work of art, well it is pretty a good one, I just love the simplicity in the work, the wonders of art are everywhere. Good work.

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Gan Chennai 23 May 2010

Everything looks pretty in my eyes. It's the way we assume. Just, close your eyes, think everything is beautiful, and open your eyes and see. Everything will look beautiful. Writing is a way of refining one. The more we write, the better we become. It's the You-1 in You expressing about You to You. Keep writing not for others, but for you.

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warner treuter 20 November 2009

Everyone should like cats, everyone.

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Sallam Yassin 11 August 2012

nice poem about nice friend, litle cat who in way or other give joy for us to live -she make me smile.it joyful thank u.

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Sallam Yassin 11 August 2012

nice poem about nice friend, litle cat who in way or other give joy for us to live -she make me smile.it joyful thank u.

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Sallam Yassin 11 August 2012

nice poem about nice friend, litle cat who in way or other give joy for us to live -she make me smile.it joyful thank u.

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Noor Liaqat 11 August 2012

Nice poem. I think the poet has a great love for her pet! ! ! !

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Hamid Negah 11 August 2012

Beautiful poem with good rhyme, i loved it, good luck.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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