My Revenge Poem by Sathya Narayana

My Revenge

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I too like to take revenge
on those who hated me,
badly treated me,
berated me
and grated
my tender feelings cruelly.

I keep my weapons ready,
for accidental accost, if any
to confront them...
yes...with open arms,
glowing smile,
gracious visage
and lastly
with a heartfelt embrace!

My revenge is now complete...
the enemy yielded
with an embarassed face
and heart throttling guilt
accepting his total defeat!

Wednesday, December 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: revenge
Chitra - 05 December 2008

the overtures of forgiveness will efface the enemies engulfing them in their own disgrace.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 December 2008

wordings are good. climax is max. good wrie

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Zoleka Lusiti 05 December 2008

Your wording is excellent, this is a good way of revenge....sweet revenge!

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Reshma Ramesh 06 December 2008

haha! ! ! ! ! ! ! i wish i could be so considerate............well penned

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Bob Blackwell 06 December 2008

So love wins through, great poem Bob

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Merna Ibrahim 18 October 2009

Remarkable title to a strong poem! ! I hope you visit my section...thanks. Merna.

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Raja Basu 07 February 2009

The poem reflects two features - a.) Your poetic skills, and b.) Your marvelous philosophy of life. Wish everybody could have thought in your way.

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Meena Iyer 16 December 2008

Ah a gentle revenge! effective never the less

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Min Sia 15 December 2008

Very great poem..of hatred into forgiveness.. Amazingly..words flowing clearly..river of emotions..inspiration..and heartwarming interpretation... Thank for sharing this wonderful poem..You're truly a great poet!

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Neelabha Mahajan 15 December 2008

Really great poem.You have described FORGIVENESS in a very beautiful manner. HATS OFF............ With regards Neelabha

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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