My Revenge Poem by Sathya Narayana

My Revenge

Rating: 4.9


I too like to take revenge
on those who hated me,
badly treated me,
berated me
and grated
my tender feelings cruelly.

I keep my weapons ready,
for accidental accost, if any
to confront them...
yes...with open arms,
glowing smile,
gracious visage
and lastly
with a heartfelt embrace!

My revenge is now complete...
the enemy yielded
with an embarassed face
and heart throttling guilt
accepting his total defeat!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A beautiful poem. u get 10++.............

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Aijaz Asif 08 December 2008

another great write with very wise thought bhayya and the weapon you used, is the best weapon ever made...thanks 10++++++ A+++ rgds asif

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Ian Singer 08 December 2008

a very good poem very good

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Sandra Fowler 07 December 2008

An excellent way to take revenge. Very Biblical, actually. If this example was followed, there would indeed be peace on earth. I like this poem very much.10 without hesitation. warm regards, Sandra

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Allan Macli Borges 07 December 2008

only from acts of love can rise times of peace... beautiful words!

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Merna Ibrahim 18 October 2009

Remarkable title to a strong poem! ! I hope you visit my section...thanks. Merna.

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Raja Basu 07 February 2009

The poem reflects two features - a.) Your poetic skills, and b.) Your marvelous philosophy of life. Wish everybody could have thought in your way.

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Meena Iyer 16 December 2008

Ah a gentle revenge! effective never the less

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Min Sia 15 December 2008

Very great poem..of hatred into forgiveness.. Amazingly..words flowing clearly..river of emotions..inspiration..and heartwarming interpretation... Thank for sharing this wonderful poem..You're truly a great poet!

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Neelabha Mahajan 15 December 2008

Really great poem.You have described FORGIVENESS in a very beautiful manner. HATS OFF............ With regards Neelabha

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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