My Shopping List Poem by Paul Hansford

You made me feel hungry on your shopping list my friend...I'm on diet today...but you also made me crave for more rhyming words to pen...my friend Ivor Hogg do poems in a perfect rhymes and meters also...Hope you'll read him, i admire his works so much.

your rhyming shopping list is good to read..tho it doesn't follow the recommended daily allowance but it follows the rule of poetic ryhmings..i like the presentation of this piece of yours..aside from its uniqueness, it is very smart...naizz

Paul! You are a glutton! ! ! ! ha ha ha!

Sir, A mouth-watering shopping list but it misses the toiletries and potions and pills for the digestive system after the grabs and glugs of your exhaustive list.A thought precarious though never came in such a gregarious way from anyone else here except you.It seems like a matrimonial occasion or day to remember be it the festive mood of christmas or the easter or thanksgiving.May be you just celebrated your birthday or long cherished marraige with someone. But one shortcoming i must remind you is that the British binge-drinkers won't like your celebration without their Jack Daniels, Gallo, Veuve Cliquot and Fosters.They are a part of the festival too.May be yours are a foodie concept so you geared up only on foods and no wines.....bon appetit for all your comidas listed here. A well deserved 10 from me.

Very imaginative and charming! Made me smile at 1: 13 a.m.! !

this is SO funny... I gotta try it some time... i just have to make sure I don't leave out anything that doesn't rhyme!

I love the originality and fun this poem evokes. It's always interesting to see what shoppers have in their trolley. Karin Anderson

A very nice one....enjoyed reading it!

Only a true poet could turn a shopping list into a work of art. I love it! S ;)