My Soul Is Totally Ripped Up, Poem by Liza Sud

My Soul Is Totally Ripped Up,

Rating: 4.8


My soul is totally ripped up,
My heart is broken.
But sewed by Saint John of Kronstadt,
By godly light is warmed and softened.

Snow covers asphalt quietly,
But no more I long for summer.
To relics of Saint John I come -
For the first time to greet and thank him.

My Soul Is Totally Ripped Up,
Tuesday, September 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephani Kievaughan 19 September 2015

Snow Covers asphalt quietly rearrange for the sake of grammar

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Liza Sudina 19 September 2015

changed! and added a picture of Saint John of kronstadt to the poem My soul is totally ripped up. thanks a lot for editing! ! !

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Miraj Raha 16 September 2015

would like to know who is this divine person, but the poem strongly holds your faith high.god bless you.

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Liza Sudina 16 September 2015

Saint John of Kronstadt - you may find his Photo in Internet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 September 2015

Borken heart in the name of love; but, life goes on! ! So, pick up the pieces and move on. Nice work.

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Kostas Lagos 19 August 2017

A poem about Saint John of Kronstadt! One of the greatest saints of Russia.Beautiful!

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2017

what does sewed mean here? needle and thread? did you 'want' a comma after But? There MUST be more to this 'story'! at least help me with a Poet's Note! please. but i won't come back looking for it. are you as 'religious' as you seem? it's ok; i still like you. ;) bri :)

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 02 April 2016

You are gifted to touch the heart of all, thanks for the wonderful poem

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Shahin Latif 23 November 2015

Really it's a lovely poem. I enjoyed this. Thank you so much.

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Saheb Mohapatra 18 October 2015

this poem is actually a portrait not made by you but by the hill of passion, talent and maturity those are lying within you.........greatly enjoyed it.

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