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My Train Of Thoughts

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I close my eyes and it starts to rain
In that instant my mind flies as I get lost in my brain
My heart tries, over and over to refrain
from these deceiving lies, but am overpowered and get carried away in this train
Of imaginations and creations
I am walking now in that rain
Of the subconscious reflections
You too are there, full of smiles and energy
I can only stare, and know you are ready
And then I ask myself if I could dare, and call you my lady

Then I rethink; is it not only fair? That maybe
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Pheko Motaung 02 March 2012

Wonderful poem! I lack further words

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Crystal Smith 21 February 2012

good poem! lady is very lucky.

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Bulletcookie 2017 19 February 2012

The steady roll of the train wheels; rumble throughout this poem. Keep working those images.

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Bulletcookie 2017 19 February 2012

The steady roll of the train wheels; rumble throughout this poem. Keep working those images.

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Jason Pacheco 19 February 2012

You captured some precious aspects of love and desire. Really nicely put!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 13 February 2012

Great poem man, like my friend Unwritten soul said, you are on the right track my friend.

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Unwritten Soul 13 February 2012

Well train need a reel and if your mind used to thought in good reel dont worry you are safe...may your train dream will stop at the best destination soon..nice write, keep it up_Unwritten Soul

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