** My Weeping Willow Tree! - Poem by RAJ NANDY

Somewhere within my heart unknowingly,
A weeping willow had taken roots secretly!
It got nurtured over the years by my forlorn
and sad thoughts;
By many heartaches and unrequited love, -
The mind seemed to have forgot!
Now the willow has become a full grown
It bends over my mind like a shadow -
to torture me!
It sheds its salty tears periodically, -
The willow has now become a part of
-Raj Nandy
30 Mar 09

Comments about ** My Weeping Willow Tree! by RAJ NANDY

  • (12/14/2009 5:11:00 AM)

    In spite of the sadness of the weeping willow tree, your energy still seems to shine through! (Report) Reply

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  • (11/24/2009 11:17:00 PM)

    A heartfelt poem that was well written. I liked how you used a weeping willow to express the sadness within. An interesting concept & a joy to read. Thanks for sharing.

    Jeannie (Spiritsong)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    Somewhere within my heart unknowingly,
    A weeping willow had taken roots secretly! ...somet6imes thyoughts are so deep roooted on mind that it always compare with .....mind will ache and flow with thoughts always.... beautiful thoughts expressed in effective oratory.....10

    read mine what happens if....
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  • (9/14/2009 10:58:00 AM)

    The metaphor of the willow is beautifully used and carried through this write. (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (9/2/2009 6:46:00 AM)

    this is beautiful, Raj..Lovely flow of words. (Report) Reply

  • (7/18/2009 8:48:00 AM)

    There is probably a legend about a Willow Tree. I find them simply beautiful. Just as she weeps
    I am sure she can dry tears with the swish of her glorious tresses. 10 Karin Anderson
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  • (5/23/2009 2:18:00 AM)

    Very poignant and skillful use of metaphor. I can hear your inner cry.
    Take care.

    Warm regards,

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  • (4/12/2009 10:45:00 PM)

    touching metaphor. Incidently i always wonder why its called a weeping willow.
    one learns in life that you have to carry your cross alone, very poignant poem.
    i too was inspired to write a haiku- Weeping Willows sometime back.

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  • (3/30/2009 12:12:00 AM)

    a touching metaphor, captain! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2009

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