My Wishing Star Poem by Payal Pradip Parande

My Wishing Star

Rating: 4.8


Beyond this blank sky there stay a star
A selfless star that brings joy to me
She is at peace, look up and see

The darker the night get the brighter she become
With An authentic nature she seem like a lie
But the lies she tell, with those I become high

Ask for a wish she say, it will never come true
She is dream waiting to wreak my sleep
But a Fool she is, I dream awake, and she is to keep

Sunday, August 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
hello everyone i am payal some people already know me and to who dont well i should say that i ' m very grateful to be here again, i took a little bit of break for some personal stuff i had to take care of. when i was here poets and readers of poemhunter gave me so much love and i am family member of this wonderful site i found myself here and i hope you will also accept me as a member.
this poem tell everything about it self so no need to explain

hope you enjoy it

with love
payal
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

A wonderful poem, Payal. Welcome back Peace

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 August 2015

Hello! good to see you here.. :) thanks for sharing your poetry, Payal p.s.: I've added you.. :)

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Ramesh T A 31 August 2015

The star of night is a dream lady who cannot be true to life is clearly stated in this poem!

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Payal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Buyi Newton Philip 05 April 2017

awesome is the word and definitely a must read to the lovers of poetry.

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Indranil Bhaduri 23 October 2015

Welcome back Payal.. sharp as ever... :)

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Loke Kok Yee 13 September 2015

Lovely, made my day. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned with conviction. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing Payal. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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