Sunday, August 30, 2015

My Wishing Star Comments

Rating: 4.8

Beyond this blank sky there stay a star
A selfless star that brings joy to me
She is at peace, look up and see
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Payal Pradip Parande
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Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Payal. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Buyi Newton Philip 05 April 2017

awesome is the word and definitely a must read to the lovers of poetry.

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Indranil Bhaduri 23 October 2015

Welcome back Payal.. sharp as ever... :)

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Loke Kok Yee 13 September 2015

Lovely, made my day. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 10 September 2015

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated, and insightfully penned with conviction. I like the rhyme scheme of the poem. Thanks for sharing Payal. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Ramesh T A 31 August 2015

The star of night is a dream lady who cannot be true to life is clearly stated in this poem!

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 August 2015

Hello! good to see you here.. :) thanks for sharing your poetry, Payal p.s.: I've added you.. :)

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Kelly Kurt 30 August 2015

A wonderful poem, Payal. Welcome back Peace

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