Mysterious Door ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Mysterious Door ~
Whenever I pass by, I always see that door remains closed
I kept passing by in hope that someday I shall see it open.
Everybody saw my patience and perseverance
That door never realized it and remained closed as ever.
Its mystery kept motivating and encouraging every time,
And I kept my hope alive without doubting any time.
Though that door remained closed in front of my eyes,
but my mind perceived it opened up in my heart.
Patience started to give up as the clouds of doubt surrounds
And the mystery remained intact behind that door
Now with me, my thoughts linger around that door
What is inside, why not opens, and what secret it holds?
With all mystery, now I wish everyone to get a similar door,
That remains closed and the secret behind it remains intact.
What is the secret behind that door....Revelation is hard to get for many....inspiring work...5*****
Wonderful poem, high on philosophy and you kept secrecy till the very end and even after it.
After having read 7 couplets, the door remains closed and with it its secret behind! 5 Stars full
I liked the suspense, v r puppet in the hands of fate afterall.
We all go thru this: Its mystery kept motivating and encouraging every time, And I kept my hope alive without doubting any time.
Wonderful philosophy...With all mystery, now I wish everyone to get a similar door, That remains closed and the secret behind it remains intact.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 5:40:30 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I see a great philosophy of life in your poem, the doors of death remains close till the very end and no one know where they go passing the doors of life. Salute for this poem.5****