Thaky paaun aur rasta buhut hay
Safar kismet se wabasta buhut hay
Mai jeena sara tum pe waar deta
Magar jeewan mera sasta buhut hay
Dalasa lakh dena chahta hun
Magr dil aap par atka buhut hay
Main bnd aankhon se guzra dar se terey
Magr dil dr tera takta buhut hay
Tumhare dr k so chakkar main kaatun
Mgr sooraj ye jald dhalta buhut hay
Yun dil mera to daana hay magar yeh
Wafa ke jaal main phansta buhut hay
Mujahy yeh chor deta saal phley
Yeh dil buzdil magr darta buhut hay
Chalo Zaib chor do apnni kahani
Fasana aap ka lamba buhut hay
Jahan Zaib 16/01/2013
Wow! ! I understand all of it. It was so pleasant. The feel was far beyond my imagination. sir, you've penned it so brilliantly. I'm sure it came right from the corner of your heart.
Payal, you maybe not understand few words but i dont understand any hahaha but still i feel the warm of the poem, i know it because its from Jahan_Soul
Acha hy lkn revise karo..... aksar lines ma lafz kam hyn.... Rhythm nahi ban pa raha....... Koch grammar ki problem feel ho rahi hy..... Words ki music pe focus karo.......
wow...ok i may didn't understand few word but other words made me understand them....i love it it is incredible and very enjoyable and very romantic....bravo sir
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! ! I understood most of it. It was so pleasant reading this composition. The feel was great and far beyond my imagination. Sir, you've penned it so brilliantly. I'm sure it came right from the corner of your heart.