Jahan zaib

Rookie - 129 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Nadaan Dil - Poem by Jahan zaib

Thaky paaun aur rasta buhut hay
Safar kismet se wabasta buhut hay

Mai jeena sara tum pe waar deta
Magar jeewan mera sasta buhut hay

Dalasa lakh dena chahta hun
Magr dil aap par atka buhut hay

Main bnd aankhon se guzra dar se terey
Magr dil dr tera takta buhut hay

Tumhare dr k so chakkar main kaatun
Mgr sooraj ye jald dhalta buhut hay

Yun dil mera to daana hay magar yeh
Wafa ke jaal main phansta buhut hay

Mujahy yeh chor deta saal phley
Yeh dil buzdil magr darta buhut hay

Chalo Zaib chor do apnni kahani
Fasana aap ka lamba buhut hay

Jahan Zaib 16/01/2013


Comments about Nadaan Dil by Jahan zaib

  • Kishor Pathak (1/21/2013 12:44:00 AM)


    Wow! ! I understood most of it. It was so pleasant reading this composition. The feel was great and far beyond my imagination. Sir, you've penned it so brilliantly. I'm sure it came right from the corner of your heart. (Report) Reply

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  • Kishor Pathak (1/21/2013 12:38:00 AM)


    Wow! ! I understand all of it. It was so pleasant. The feel was far beyond my imagination. sir, you've penned it so brilliantly. I'm sure it came right from the corner of your heart. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (1/16/2013 9:47:00 AM)


    Payal, you maybe not understand few words but i dont understand any hahaha but still i feel the warm of the poem, i know it because its from Jahan_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Xelam Kan™ (1/16/2013 8:22:00 AM)


    Acha hy lkn revise karo..... aksar lines ma lafz kam hyn....
    Rhythm nahi ban pa raha.......
    Koch grammar ki problem feel ho rahi hy.....
    Words ki music pe focus karo.......
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  • (1/16/2013 8:21:00 AM)


    wow...ok i may didn't understand few word but other words made me understand them....i love it it is incredible and very enjoyable and very romantic....bravo sir (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 16, 2013


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