Narrative Of A Long Night Poem by Soran M. H

Narrative Of A Long Night

Rating: ★5.0


Night is fallen
and the single star writing in the heavens
remembers...

The silence of stars
Shining from the heavens

The oak tree's hair is unkempt,
its root parched
by stony-hearted clouds
whose teardrops never fall.
The oaks are become
monuments for the squirrels
who ran before the hunter's cries -
the trees do not thirst
for the squirrels' blood
In their passion the oaks
have burnt themselves,
one by one.

The stars silently from the
Heavens shining,

Hungry squirrels are left there
until they die, dreaming
of what lies outside
the cold and putrid rooms,
Iron- doored, lights extinguished.
The hunters say:
We bring comfort of the green of spring
and the yellow of summer,
but the wild squirrels are grey.

The breeze deceives the cypress
while the wind cuts off its leg
and leaves fall, hopeless,
without farewell to the tree -
that high roost of a tired stork.

Old children crawl
toward the vase
where their age was grown
but the breeze deceived and was the wind
and the vase, like the mirror, is cracked.

Families
considering the moon
sell the flower vase
but their hands cannot reach the moon
and they have been dreaming.

Stars silently from
The heavens shining

In the jail
the noise increases...
in the trading room
the noise increases...
but the light in the squirrel's eyes is gone
and the storks seeks a new country
where no-one will cast him out.

In the corner of the terminal,
drifting in the sleep of waiting,
the babble of the building
disturbs this young man's thoughts
saying:

The sun has deceived you -
it will not rise again
until this century of night is ended
and the sunflowers may raises their heads once
more.

2003

Friday, August 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: farewell,hopeless,narrative
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 27 December 2019

Stars of the night! ! Thoughts and memories; Like storks seeking for a new Country. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soran M. H 29 December 2019

thanks Edward for having time to read my poem, appreciating your comment...cheers

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Susan Williams 02 February 2020

So extremely well-written, Soran. I am going to reread this one often and savor the sheer poetic talent flowing through your pen. 10+ and onto my fav list

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Soran M. H 03 February 2020

Dear Susan honestly the pen is speechless about your lovely comment, only I can say many thanks for your views and time you have given to my humble works to read them...well done and cheers from the the heart dear great poet..

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Kesav Easwaran 26 January 2020

" The hunters say: We bring comfort of the green of spring and the yellow of summer, but the wild squirrels are grey" Brilliant lines. Your poems I find are images rich adorned by beautiful words. And this one also. Nice write 10+

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2026

Cont. ' The breeze deceives the cypress while the wind cuts off its leg'. Indeed, what a joy to read!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2026

Loved these striking lines: ' And the single star writing in the heavens remembers.' ' The oak trees hair is unkempt

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2026

Cont. Truly, this poetic gem is worth revisiting and must be read by all.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2026

The comments of the wonderful Poetess, Susan Williams, resonates with me-- ' I am going to reread this one often and savor the sheer poetic talent flowing through your pen.'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 November 2021

A great poem! Lofty expression.... just magnificent. To score

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