Neelum! Poem by AFFAQ NABI

Neelum!

Rating: 3.9


Neelum (beautiful sapphire, always shining bright)
Neelum is a resting place.
of this blue shimmer.
Where joy lulls into eyes the joy,  
and worries vanish.
Like dim, dusky clouds from gracious ezman,  
While happy day sinks into sweet night,  
My purple past prime comes into
eye like leaves on a willow tree!  

O! you love!  
Though not yours! but you yourself hither live,  
The beauty that you bear on tenant,  
Notice no prejudice or apartheid,  
My love;  
When you bear a baby! You know:
She may receive its nude beauty in heirs'y
You be mine love, and she will use its sapphire treasury.

Neelum!
Monday, April 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Truth 13 April 2019

This Is The Most Boring Poetry Site On The Web

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SO HO 13 April 2019

Why are you on it? Your truth has no foundation. Just a dope!

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 April 2019

beautiful poetic expression- When you bear a baby! You know: She may receive it nude beauty in heirs'y- You be mine love- And she'll use its sapphire treasury- //

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Kayode Are 13 April 2019

Confusing imagery. Truly I did not know what to make of this poem. Intriguing.

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Honest Critic 13 April 2019

So true! Confusing indeed! Thanks for being honest, Kayode!

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Dominic Windram 16 April 2019

Excellent poem....well written!

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 April 2019

Beauty and poetry being resident in the eye of the heholder, or reader, well I believe we should understand.

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Honest Critic 13 April 2019

My purple past prime! What the heck is that supposed to mean?

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Honest Critic 13 April 2019

Really, this poem has awful grammar and imagery. How can you hypocrites praise such meaningless garbage?

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Savita Tyagi 13 April 2019

That hazy blue valley! Captures all the longings of heart. congratulations!

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