The negative
In
My mind
That
I would like
To speak about
The negative
Flashing
In your mind
At
The glance
Of the title
Need not
Be
The same
For
I am lost in awe
With souvenir
On looking
A negative
On the top of attic
Left
Unwashed in lab
Fot its stupid pose....
Nice thought again, I wish you good luck in writing such small yet pungent poems.
In place of negative feelings one is supposed to nurture the positive feelings as in the wisest words of great men.A good poem here I enjoys
This small but beautiful poem has an element of suspense of its own which enthralls. The mystery is resolved when the negative is discovered: Left / Unwashed in lab / For its stupid pose....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Keep it in the attic itself. Beautiful way of poem telling 10/10