Queeny Gona

Silver Star - 4,299 Points (16th august,1987 / KANIGIRI)

My Wish To Fly - Poem by Queeny Gona

If I have given a wish!
I would fly high in the sky.
Not just for the joy of flying,
Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
Drag their masks out of their faces.
Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
To build a cheaters free society.


Comments about My Wish To Fly by Queeny Gona

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/24/2017 2:49:00 AM)


    I would fly high in the sky.
    Not just for the joy of flying,
    ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
    And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards, ....nice ideology. Beautiful theme. Dear Gona, your commitment to make a swindlersless society is acceptable. Thank u for sharing the gem with us.10
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  • Luo Zhihai (7/16/2017 4:04:00 AM)


    wish you fly in the sky (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (6/5/2017 8:39:00 AM)


    a poem full of good intent which if taken on board would make our world better? .............well written (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (6/2/2017 8:32:00 AM)


    excellent beautiful but a small edit may be
    If I (have! ! ! ! !) I am given a wish!
    may be better
    young kid
    you have poetry in your veins
    I can see it
    keep at it
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  • (5/30/2017 4:53:00 AM)


    Hypocrites are everywhere but difficult to find them unless the crisis grows to such an extent. To find out them the poet have a solemn wish to fly. Good imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Rini Jerry (5/26/2017 4:12:00 AM)


    Well written..let your wish come true (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (5/8/2017 3:08:00 AM)


    High thoughts, high aims finally materialize. Flying not just for pleasure or for a sense of freedom but to achieve a great end like reforming a society. My best wishes. A thought-provoking write. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (11/26/2016 1:22:00 AM)


    Loaded with lovely longings for a laudable life of both truth and transparency. Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Padinjattakathu (7/7/2016 3:46:00 AM)


    remove the sheep cloth out of leopards - great expression! Nice poem! Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/21/2016 4:10:00 AM)


    To dream along with the joy of your heart! With hope and faith. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • (10/22/2015 10:03:00 AM)


    Very commendable desire but quite difficult to accomplish. As a poem it is enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. Ten points. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (10/22/2015 9:21:00 AM)


    The poem shows your commitment to remove all ills afflicting the society. Amazing poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (10/22/2015 4:48:00 AM)


    Dreams are part of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/22/2015 1:07:00 AM)


    Nice thought.Wish I could fly with you. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (9/9/2015 9:53:00 PM)


    Your focus on social concerns and also on the hypocrisy of people is commendable. Thanks. Following lines say it eloquently:
    Nor just to enjoy the beauty of nature;
    But: to trace the hypocrites in the society
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  • Paul Amrod (9/9/2015 5:45:00 PM)


    Hi Quenny, My comment is much like Valsa George that we believe in your conviction and search for truth and justice.
    Saying out of their faces means that it was a part of their face which is also true and the permanent sheep's clothing that the leopards have is simply ripped out. Very strong and dynamic language. Thank you for your revolutionary comments. From an old Woodstock Hippy Paul
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/9/2015 3:00:00 PM)


    o trace the hypocrites in the society
    And remove the sheep cloth out of leopards,
    Drag their masks out of their faces.
    Thus bringing to light all the loopholes of the society,
    To build a cheaters free society. this is a great vision my dear Poetess. if you can fly..so high, please do it. let your dream come true dear. thank you
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  • Ging Taping (8/3/2015 12:50:00 AM)


    This is also my wish to flyhigh into the sky..to relax away from work and just glide with the clouds.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (6/15/2015 1:06:00 PM)


    You have high ideals and high spirits.Nice penning dear Queeny. (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2015 2:55:00 AM)


    This is my wish, too. A well-crafted piece of art dear.10/10... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 12, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 20, 2013


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