Negatively Positive Me Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Negatively Positive Me

Rating: 3.5


It's a positive that I'm alone with death
by birth we befriended, best friends til life's end
Negatively positive
I'm a positive in a negative mind
an environment refund living like a rebound
never wanted yet not discarded
happiness unconditional, so is my loneliness
suicidal mind's eye in tune to suicide's lies,
wise to the blind side
a smile for my hurt, a tear for my joy
food to fuel the life, hugs to pain's comfort
negatively positive as
I'm a positive in my negative mind

Monday, September 24, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: birth,environment,loneliness,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this piece is based on my attitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sehgal 06 October 2012

the beauty of loneliness... lovely.. read

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Pink Pixie 28 September 2012

Wow this is so powerful. I enjoyed it so much that I wasn't ready for it to end. I found myself wishing it would have kept going. I invite you to read my poem Escape. After writing it I found myself having more to say so I wrote a second or a continuation called Escape II. When you have the time take a look and let me know if you have any comments.

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Gwenevere Cornwell 24 September 2012

I am the same way, mon ami. Je t'aime.

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Stevie Taite 24 September 2012

An optimistic pessimist x

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