I Said hi when I meant goodbye
It's not a lie, not do I lie, just a rare truth
Is not even that I like it when you cry
Just an uncontrolled smile
You hurt, I create
You suspect, I evade
You react, I sustain
You walk, I reclaim
Left you hanging,
A noose round the neck
A river flow, blood red
Joys torment,
A gentle push
Cliff dive
A guilty love of holding power over someone who has lost self worth. The attraction to someone that for some reason you feel ashamed of, (like a natzi over a Jew but not quite thet extreme) That is what I get from this interesting read.
Excellent the expression to illustrate the truth. Unique indeed.
A beautiful poem, a well deserved selection of poem of the day.
This is a moving one, written with passion. Keep on posting and do not give up.
when you cry I smile, when you ask I retract, when you hug I am idle, the last stanza is poetically sad and true...that is what we are doing to other human being.... well done dear Kelvin Owusu..keep it up..
The last stanza soars before leap fatal, insightful and intriguing.
............congratulations....I really like how you wrote this one....especially the second stanza....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Craftily created. A lovely piece. Keep it up and thanks for sharing.