Kelvin Owusu

Rookie - 134 Points (15-10-1988 / Ghana)

My World - Poem by Kelvin Owusu

My mind's a mess,
Scrambled by the thought of you
A feeling towards that I can't define
The heart of mine, you
Because the soul's whole, you
It would be a crime
A life, any life without.

Doubts? Never
I do, but not forever
Is not enough
Existence beyond the next plane
I will, even if you stop


Comments about My World by Kelvin Owusu

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (9/23/2012 12:44:00 PM)


    I like this, Kelvin, how you define your world with the character you and the determination not to stop defining and loving... (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (9/2/2012 3:01:00 AM)


    A fusion of emotion and freedom, telling all from heart with one intention, such a good one for a good write..keep it up_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (9/1/2012 11:09:00 AM)


    wow.too philosophical.that's the nice one i've ever read.
    tnx
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  • (8/29/2012 12:07:00 AM)


    wonderful lines.. Reminding of immortal words of.
    1.
    By Rabindranath Tagore,

    Faith is that bird, sing much before the dawn,

    2.Rumi
    There is plane above good and bad,
    I will meet you there,

    3.
    Nisargadatta maharaj
    Knowledge says I am nothing,
    Love says I am everything,
    Between my life flows!

    Thank you!
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  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (8/27/2012 2:27:00 PM)


    I like this Kelvin, the focus on the as your world and that around this person in the poem your thoughts and heart are captured. (Report) Reply

  • (8/27/2012 2:14:00 PM)


    I like this poem. I like that you convey that you're mind is messed up and you have doubts about moving foward, but you still won't stop. (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (8/27/2012 12:22:00 PM)


    Totally get your anguish and pain! Feelings transcend beyond culture, beliefs, conditioning etc! We feel them
    There fore they are not invisible. We have to deal with them, but try to cause the least pain for everyone involved, including ourselves!
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  • Ngwa Louis (8/27/2012 10:00:00 AM)


    short great poem. keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (8/27/2012 9:49:00 AM)


    Very well, this is so nice, especially the meaning
    well done.!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 27, 2012



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