New Beginning Poem by Colleen Courtney

New Beginning

Rating: 4.3


Autumn leaves come tumbling down
Same as my tears
Falling to the ground
Released unfettered
They float unbound.

Soon to wither
Curl and brown
Those leaves will die
Upon the earth
As my tears too shall dry
With my renewing spring rebirth.

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kirti Sharma 15 May 2014

Wonderful poem...! First three lines of the 1st stanza are beautiful....

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Mazhari David 14 May 2014

The tears/leaves metaphor leading to resurgence hit me. Thanks.* *

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 13 May 2014

Hello poet Colleen and this is another great romance poem with a nice surprise ending. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Anand Brown 13 May 2014

Magnificent use of your creative genius. I love how you use narrative skills to draw the readers in. Lovely poem.

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Shobana Gomes 11 May 2014

I love autumn but spring has much hope - two diverse seasons. Brilliant poem and the imagery is outstanding Colleen. Thank you too for your ever supportive comments on my poems and have a great week ahead.

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Abhipsa Tripathy 05 May 2015

A great poem with two drops of tear.I wish in every one's life the tears will dry and a new beginning will step forward.thanks.......................

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Tyrone Gayle 18 September 2014

As I start a new semester in college and new stage of my life this poem was captivating from the start. Your used of words as a paint brush creates amazing art pieces.

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Cheryl Griffith 05 August 2014

Beautiful poem, so full of imagery, a well painted picture I could actually see it happening. That's what poetry is about, the emotions, the senses (see, touch, taste, smell) you brought it all out. I love it

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Chris Zachariou 15 July 2014

Every time I read one of your poems I am touched by the sensitivity and loveliness of your words. I love the sadness but also the note of hope with which you end your poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2014

Life and seasons are victims of a cycle, tears after smile and smile after tears and sometimes tears joy in excitement, all are parts of life. A nice write.

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