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New Beginning

Rating: 4.3
Autumn leaves come tumbling down
Same as my tears
Falling to the ground
Released unfettered
They float unbound.

Soon to wither
Curl and brown
Those leaves will die
Upon the earth
As my tears too shall dry
With my renewing spring rebirth.
Colleen Courtney
Tuesday, March 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
Abhipsa Tripathy 05 May 2015
A great poem with two drops of tear.I wish in every one's life the tears will dry and a new beginning will step forward.thanks.......................
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Tyrone Gayle 18 September 2014
As I start a new semester in college and new stage of my life this poem was captivating from the start. Your used of words as a paint brush creates amazing art pieces.
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Cheryl Griffith 05 August 2014
Beautiful poem, so full of imagery, a well painted picture I could actually see it happening. That's what poetry is about, the emotions, the senses (see, touch, taste, smell) you brought it all out. I love it
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Chris Zachariou 15 July 2014
Every time I read one of your poems I am touched by the sensitivity and loveliness of your words. I love the sadness but also the note of hope with which you end your poem.
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Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2014
Life and seasons are victims of a cycle, tears after smile and smile after tears and sometimes tears joy in excitement, all are parts of life. A nice write.
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Simplicity at its best.......downpour of emotions captured in spring and autumn at its very best..........a great piece
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Sohan Prasad Sharma 24 June 2014
lovely, sweetly weaved, knitted and sublime!
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Abdulla Al-hemaidy 23 June 2014
So nice reading! I liked this short poem :)
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Amitava Sur 21 June 2014
A lovely poem Coleen fostering good times in the days to come.... loved it
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Robert Melliard 12 June 2014
I have read three more of your poems and I like them all. Dream Within a Dream is great fun. In New Beginning the words released, unfettered and unbound are perhaps a little too similar in meaning to be placed so close together, but the comparison between tears and falling leaves is original. Love without Sex is my favourite however, because it is expressed in a beautifully natural, conversational, relaxed way. I would be grateful if you could comment on one or two of my recent poems as I have had no feedback about them yet.
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