Night Poem by merna ibrahim

Night

Rating: 5.0


At night, everything take a rest.
The birds are silent in their nest.
Humans take a break after doing their best.
And the child sleeps next to his mother's breast.

The feet of angels are bright,
They finish their mission at night.
Unseen they pour blessing,
And erase any depressing.

At night, people deeply sleep
however the sun gradually creeps.
The moon sits and smiles on the night
And the stars join it with delight.

The night is tranquil and dark
And this is a fact, it's not my remark! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philosophy of a DewyFlower 06 November 2009

wow! what a beautiful description! your Pen designed in my Mind a poetic night! the rhyme is wonderful, you write with zeal! ! ! keep it up! I liked your NIGHT 10+++++ Thanks For Sharing/

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Blue Eyes 30 October 2009

nivce rhyme, i liked the poem in general.

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Ahmed Abdalla 30 October 2009

great use of words. i love it :)

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Akram Awadat 29 October 2009

oh merna it is very beautiful poem, i like it 10+

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Emma Adamyan 29 October 2009

i felt this poem like slight caress. it`s so sweet

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 July 2017

The feet of angels are bright, They finish their mission at night. Unseen they pour blessing, And erase any depressing. night, angels, sleep, beauty of the night, peace of the night and rest. beautiful reflections on night. thank you dear poetess.for this fine poem on NIght. tony

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 February 2010

At night, people deeply sleep however the sun gradually creeps. The moon sits and smiles on the night And the stars join it with delight. ya nights are beautiful and lovely and i share your feeelings Merna.. long time but beautiful your poems.....10 read mine virginitry at stake... parting ways....no separate ways

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Zeinab Sherif 27 November 2009

mmm..ok..i liked the last two lines the most, it's very simple & meaningful one.10++

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Ravi Sathasivam 22 November 2009

'At night, everything take a rest. The birds are silent in their nest. Humans take a break after doing their best. And the child sleeps next to his mother's breast.' Beautiful description. Wonderful rhyme. Night...I love that. Enjoyed reading it 10+

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Obinna Eruchie 09 November 2009

A beautiful night it is to have a view at, and I love your adorable view at the enchanting night.

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