Don't blow your head, nothing deserves.
Don't be angry, nothing deserves.
Don't backlash someone, nothing deserves.
Don't be so hard on yourself, nothing deserves.
Try not to lose someone, nothing deserves.
Try to adapt with life, nothing deserves.
Try to be hopeful, nothing deserves.
Try to be obedient to God, nothing deserves.
We are all mortals, nothing deserves.
We are all going to die.nothing deserves.
We must do our best to enter the paradise.
We sure don't want to pay that high price.
you expressed your feelings in short lines..i liked the poem.keep it up.10++for you
yes Merna, very honest message in simple lines... i like it friend 10.. Ali
An honest piece, expressed very well...many will relate to this my friend..keep up the great work
Wow........ We have a bunch of nice advices here from little 'old' girl Merna.
We are all mortals, nothing deserves. We are all going to die.nothing deserves........yes we are all mortals and there is universal truth in it.. i likedd the idea....10 read mine noteasy..beauty.. entry
Dear Merna- each verse tells a whole STORY, each verse tells that this life is nothing, this life is just a long Journey... Nothing Deserves that's Right because everything comes and goes/ 10+++ Thanks For Sharing/
very wise.. few words but so intensive.. let your light be your guide..
I liked your poem merna, your ryhme and your way of writing.your poem is simple but it's really has a great meaning.10+++
you are eight, we cannot expect something from any human beings except God, merna.....merna.... you are really right.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A fine poetic enumeration of opinion though i found the repeatition of phrase nothing deserve more redundant...fine ending for the theme....Thanks