Night (Haiku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt
Night (Haiku)
From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"
the silvery moon
reflects on a placid lake
chorus of crickets
There were days that we were traveling at night and we have seen this wonderful scenery. One of the most fascinating scene I have ever seen at nighttime. Beautifully crafted haiku as always, Bipasha.
nice image, bipasha. this works as poem. if you'd want to be technically truer to haiku, however, consider changing the order—as the phrase that sets the poem in a season comes in the first line—so chorus of crickets (a good phrase!) would come first. -glen
Thank you. I knew that a seasonal word must be present in a haiku, but was not aware that seasonal reference must come in the first line.
Beautiful Haiku........... I think that you are a cricket lover!
Incredible Haiku. Lovely visualization. Very well done Bipasha!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful haiku. Well thought out and nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Bipasha.