Night Song Poem by David Wood

Night Song

Rating: 5.0


You lay there in your thoughts,
That unwelcome intrusion

Like the tinnitus, that gift
Given by the military,

That remains until overtaken
Either by sleep, or the alarm.

Spirals like swirling black holes
Capturing suns and planets

Go round and round in your
Head. Thinking of the direction

Black holes swirl through doesn't
Help. Do they have tinnitus?

Loneliness is the only synergy
With every star or passing comet.

Touching that illusive gift of sleep
And melting away into the night,

That welcome amnesia of the
Stars silently crossing space

They also have ticking body clocks
As they travel through time,

Gently, silently, sleep overtakes you
Like melting snow flakes.

Wednesday, December 1, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: nightfall,sleep,random thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 01 December 2021

Omg how did you read my mind? That's exactly my state of mind. Very very nice poem..compliments.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 December 2021

Beautiful poem with crystalline imagery. Wonderful poetic expressions. Yes, we are in the same boat, having the same night song. A poetic gem. Top Marks! ! ! !

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2021

The night song is beautiful.......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2021

Slowly, surely and gently like melting snowflakes, the poem erases all unwelcome intrusions.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 02 December 2021

Gently gently the poem takes over the mind. Full *************

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2021

Comforting words that made me shed tears Bravo!

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