Awake for hours and staring at the ceiling
Through the unsettled stillness of the night
He grows possessed of the obsessive feeling
That dawn has come and gone and brought no light.
Remaining awake to see the clock ticking away relentlessly is not a very pleasant task indeed...What a lovely way of describing it...That dawn has come and gone and brought no light. Congrats, once again, Vikram, for being the Poet of the Day!
unsettled stillness of the night, wisely used thid phrase in this short poem, sounds good work
This poem 'BEGS' to have more stanzas, but stands alone as a tribute to insomnia. bri ;) 4 stars
Crisp and concise, yet the poem, with an apt title, clearly draws a picture of night watching 'Through the unsettled stillness of the night'. I commend poet Rajnish Mongia for 'seeing through' the poem and bringing out the gist of it, shared with his own wisdom.
Inner darkness or the pervading pessimism does not allow us to see light of positivity. Beautifully expressed by the poet. Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
dawn has come and brought no light.... can be interpreted in many ways... lovely reading