Nightly Sky Ride.... Poem by Varsha M

Nightly Sky Ride....

Rating: 5.0


The bloom of moon
In milky white robe
Mesmerized every hope
That thought to shine once.

The starry flower around
Joined hands to honor her once more
As they sail her on flowery water
Meant especially to embrace grace in her.

Lovely is the union vision
Moon on flowery voyage
Enchanting flute of camoflage
Hypnotizing souls in pure love.

Moon on flowery float although
Never missed even one word
Preserved them for future load
Creating another visible bond.

Bond of flower and moon shone
Until purpose of hope didn't bloom.

Nightly Sky Ride....
Wednesday, November 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Domnic Windram poem Now the moon.
Photo courtesy on pinterest.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2020

The starry flower around/Joined hands to honor her once more/As they sail her on flowery water/ Meant especially to embrace grace in her.....splendidly expressed! A beautiful piece of poetry....Top score!

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Rajnish Manga 02 December 2020

Amazing landscape re-created with beautiful words followed by a fantastic commentary encompassing the 'Bond of flower and moon'. Thanks a lot for the poem.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 28 November 2020

Spring blooms Flower blossoms In this poem

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Clyde King 28 November 2020

Nice. Good imagery, solid metaphors. The moon and the flower are lovely things in their own right.

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Yiyan Han 26 November 2020

Beautifully written. Bright Moon and colourful flowers do come together.5+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 September 2021

The superb imagery of this write makes us sail with the wonders of the night. Beautifully crafted write, Varsha. Very lovely poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 August 2021

Loveliest is the union vision Moon on flowery voyage Enchanting flute of camoflage Hypnotizing souls in pure love. Very impressive and finest poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 August 2021

This poem amazingly rendered, created by an artistic and Beautiful Mind, to my Favourites!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 August 2021

WOW! Wonderful picture of the moon, created with an artistic and beautiful Mind, enjoyed much! 5 Stars full

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 August 2021

An exquisitely beautiful poem, which captures the heart and imagination. It's in my List.

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