No Goodbyes Poem by Pratyaksh Bhati

No Goodbyes

Rating: 4.5


My mother's footsteps
Were so quiet
I barely heard her leave.

no good morning's, no hustle bustle for school.
no good night's, no goodnight kisses

no goodbyes,
just a letter.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it's terrible poem I know
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 06 December 2022

As I was reading your poem, I cried. Shedding tears of sorrow for the pain that you've endured. And tears of joy...for your courage...for your maturity...for your honesty...for such great talent at such a young age. KEEP ON WRITING!

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A totally different approach to the bond between the mother and the son. Extraordinary

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David Wood 04 December 2022

Keep writing,5 stars.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 December 2022

It isn't a terrible poem sometimes, I think that and it published on this website and I get the most postive comments Bravo!

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Kaci Tami 21 December 2022

no goodbyes, just a letter

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Kaci Tami 21 December 2022

Hi Pratkayash

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Arapunachukwu Peter 10 December 2022

Good

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Pratyaksh Bhati 08 December 2022

sorry for the title

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However, dear poet, the caption of the poem doesn't conform to the sobriety of the poem. ‘ Absquatulate' is often used in a humorous, demeaning sense. Which, of course is not the mood of the poem.

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Pratyaksh Bhati 08 December 2022

point noted sir

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