No More Poem by Rini Shibu

No More

Rating: 5.0


Once it used to write songs
And shade beautiful pictures
Now It has lost it's color and ink
The pen which used to write for you
The ink which you forgot to fill
No more it will be the same
Coz it has rusted and hardened
   

Sunday, June 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: pen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 24 June 2018

This is a very great and a very creative poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2018

Everything has a life but sometimes our minds are blocked for new thoughts, again something gives an idea and new thoughts start coming.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2018

The usefulness of a thing will cease its.valuable purpose if it is not well taken cared of and nurtured. A very perceptive write well crafted.10++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 June 2018

Hi Rini, Sad poem... A writers’ block? Nice write..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 June 2018

In this transient world nothing is permanent. You dear Rini, taking this theme nicely have composed a brilliant poem. I like the way of presentation. Beautiful poem.10

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Kostas Lagos 24 June 2018

Abandonment makes the pen hard and rusty.It even makes hearts cold and barren.Superb poem once again!

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