No More Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Expressive and well phrase that can touch ones emotion.Good job!

Brokenhearted..good thing you have an outlet..let that emotions flow through... But great poem..you are really a great poet!

I think it good that you could write this and help get the hurt out of your heart. Thank you for sharing. Karin Anderson

i'm not quite sure i know what to say to this one...or even how i feel about it...i mean obviously you had a broken heart and you were at the bottom and you couldn't go anywhere but i was a little confused with the whole mall thing..you could you possibly explain this to me? ? ?

as time went on you mend your broken heart together the way it was before ya'll met......and now your over it...... An incredible piece...yet simple but good

Bittersweet.. As good-bye so often is. Your pain is apparent. But your mood is resolute. 'no more'. I agree. You deserve better. I like your rhymes. Warm regards, Sandra

I love the rhyming you wrote this well.. great write KRISTA

incredibly heart wrentching makes me want to never enter a mall again, but i keep making that promise to myself

This is really great, I can really connect and feel for you, most of my poems are usually about love, thanks for sharing this...

now that i have no heart no soul and that there is no lower place to fall Great lines indeed