No War Poem by Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe)

No War

Rating: 4.2


The war must stay outta here,
Peace must linger in here,
Why war, why not peace,
Why 'ways desmantle,
Why not stay gentle,
Why make shooting sounds,
Why not keep safe and sound?
The question's asked to all
Everyone can play their role
So our offsprings get you as idol
Peace but peace above all.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just peace that we ask. No more nor less
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 August 2015

Nicely penned piece of poetry with a call for universal brotherhood of man. An insightful poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks for commenting Chinedu Dike

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Allotey Abossey 29 July 2015

War is destructive and must not be encouraged. This also implies we gotta watch our relationship with one another and know how to move along. But whatever happens war is not an option. Good work friend

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Thanks for commenting Allotey Abossey

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Thanks you very much

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Akhtar Jawad 27 July 2015

A great message, I liked the poem.........................10

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Thank you very much indeed

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Thanks you very much indeed

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