David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

No Way Jose - Poem by David Darbyshire

as when
four auto's arrive
at a crosssection
at the same time

no one wants to say:
'I'll give way'
you carry on
have a nice Day'

everyone is
on their way
and nothing will
upset one's day

Einstein felt fine
why is it a crime
when I'm having
a good time?

do I have to
slump along
belong
to the rest

no way
'Jose'
I'm havin a great day
and it's gonna stay
that way


Comments about No Way Jose by David Darbyshire

  • (9/20/2008 9:24:00 PM)


    Yeah, I like that one. Yes, my name is jose, and i´ve been told that sentence. Quite brilliant (Report) Reply

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  • (5/1/2006 4:39:00 PM)


    To give way can mean to give a better way, brilliant words here again David, Love Duncan (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2006 12:54:00 PM)


    Go and enjoy yor day Dave! Good flow

    Patricia
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  • (5/1/2006 12:36:00 PM)


    Great flow to this David, an enjoyable read. Kind regards, Justine. (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2006 12:26:00 PM)


    Dave,
    You go right ahead and enjoy your day Dave!
    Hugs,
    Dee
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  • (5/1/2006 11:59:00 AM)


    haha, i love this.

    reminds me of a line from the Beat poet generation:
    lives cross lives
    idling at stoplights.

    best care,
    cant wait to read more,
    sus
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 1, 2006



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