No Way Jose Poem by David Darbyshire

No Way Jose

Rating: 5.0


as when
four auto's arrive
at a crosssection
at the same time

no one wants to say:
'I'll give way'
you carry on
have a nice Day'

everyone is
on their way
and nothing will
upset one's day

Einstein felt fine
why is it a crime
when I'm having
a good time?

do I have to
slump along
belong
to the rest

no way
'Jose'
I'm havin a great day
and it's gonna stay
that way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 01 May 2006

haha, i love this. reminds me of a line from the Beat poet generation: lives cross lives idling at stoplights. best care, cant wait to read more, sus

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Jose Luis Cuervo 20 September 2008

Yeah, I like that one. Yes, my name is jose, and i´ve been told that sentence. Quite brilliant

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Duncan Wyllie 01 May 2006

To give way can mean to give a better way, brilliant words here again David, Love Duncan

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Patricia Gale 01 May 2006

Go and enjoy yor day Dave! Good flow Patricia

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R H 01 May 2006

Great flow to this David, an enjoyable read. Kind regards, Justine.

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Dee Daffodil 01 May 2006

Dave, You go right ahead and enjoy your day Dave! Hugs, Dee

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