poet Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

+noetic Kiss +++

If you could love me
Even for one second,
You would understand
The tale my thoughts could tell you...
You would understand
Why the dreams would never be
Reproduced by the delusions,
Those never ending dreams....
By using some lost pieces of the broken stars,
We could recreate a new amphora
Of light in our souls,
And we could swallow
Its blue infinite,
Just you and me and our thrill,
That thrill being
Like a butterfly with trembling wings
On the cherry blossom petals of a flower,
A butterfly swirling in the breeze
With its untouched sensations
Within its untouched world,
Or like a noetic kiss in our sleep.

Copyright © ® Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 15, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, June 3, 2016

Form: Ars Poetica


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  • John KnightJohn Knight (2/8/2010 10:07:00 AM)

    Hi Mari - A beautiful poem from your beautiful Heart. A Neotic Kiss in our dreams is always perfect - it feels perfect - it tastes perfect and the emotional effect is perfect - it is so so much better than a mere physical kiss. 'Dreams are never really reproduced by delusions'. When we reach out to someone 'neotetically' it only takes one second of love (V 1) . V 3 We would begin to understand the difference between metaphysical love and love in 'real space and time'. V 5 & 6 The 'infinite blue amphora recreated from the lost peices of broken stars' is awesome 'Just you and me and our thrill'. V 8 This is so so experiential Mari and absolutely describes the infinite thrill of 'Dream Love'. Metaphorically Butterlfy wings - Cherry blossom petals - untoched sensations' admit it Mari - you have been there - 'Like a Neotic kiss in our sleep'. Thank you for sharing the object of your Dream Love must be a perfect Dream Lover.
    Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

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  • Akram Awadat (1/12/2010 2:25:00 PM)

    fantastic poem, thanks for sharing

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  • Rahul Aithal (12/9/2009 7:55:00 AM)

    ike a butterfly with trembling wings
    on the cherry blossom petals swirling in the breeze
    with their untouched sensations,
    within their untouched world....

    Beautiful..

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  • Eyan Desir (12/5/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    Yes nice wording
    fine poetic lines
    well crafted

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  • Mari Velazco (11/4/2009 5:56:00 PM)

    aww that is so cute and adorablke like margaret said the diction was vividly wonderful keep up the great work

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  • Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:41:00 PM)

    The diction is vividly wonderful in a way that shows innovation
    10

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  • Mark Wahlberg (10/28/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    this is a beautiful poem, your writing is truly beginning to grow on me..
    10

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  • Jessica Hoffman (10/9/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    Congratulations for your imagery and innovative, creative writing........10

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/3/2009 1:45:00 PM)

    Glib touch-down in valley of love-utopia with exuberance and oozing euphoria.
    Ten.
    Ms. Nivedita.
    UK
    Cordially invite to read and comment on my poems.
    niv

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (10/3/2009 1:33:00 AM)

    this poem carries a romance sweetly transcendal flowing inside it...thanks Marieta...10

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  • Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 7:39:00 AM)

    A theme treated both noetically and romantically, and with good imagery

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  • Philip Winchester (9/29/2009 7:52:00 PM)

    Poetic Memories of this Kiss will stay with me a while I hope.
    Love can and does last I hope a lifetime, but that kiss I am afraid
    may only have a limited shelf life.Nice Poem, I like your style.
    Philip

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  • Sergio Bruno (9/26/2009 5:54:00 PM)

    on a different type of kiss..loved reading the poem...........

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  • Irenio Bero (9/23/2009 3:02:00 PM)

    Hi dear Marieta. i love the way you write your poems. its intringuing and very logical. mature lines and it really expresses great thoughts and ideas.

    i just wish some dreams could become realities instead of vanities carried by the wings of dillision. great poem darling.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2009 8:45:00 AM)

    If you could love me
    even for one second
    you would understand
    how much would hurt this waiting
    You would understand
    why dreams would never be really
    reproduced by delusions …yes dear it is hundred percent correct why dreams may not turn true.. it is so lovely write and demands kudos from mefor the brillaint wriote....10

    read mine all dreams not come true...mary to marry... love at first sight

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  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (8/30/2009 2:00:00 PM)

    just you and me and our thrill
    like a butterfly with trembling wings
    on a flower petal in the breeze
    with their untouched sensations,
    or like a noetic kiss in our sleep.

    wonderful imageries! all together an WOW!
    10+

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  • _____________________________________ - (8/30/2009 12:20:00 PM)

    and we could swallow
    its infinite blue..

    a hunger endless

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  • Obinna Eruchie (8/29/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    The diction is vividly wonderful in a way that shows innovation.

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  • Ben Gieske (8/28/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    I like the imagery of this poem and 'noetic kiss' is a wonderful expression. Congratulations for your imagery and innovative, creative writing.

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  • Patti Masterman (8/28/2009 6:19:00 PM)

    Marieta, with this beautiful poem, your writing is truly beginning to grow on me..(smile)

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