Not Of This World Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Not Of This World

Rating: 5.0


I do think
I am not
Of this world
I cannot
Damn conform
To screwy restrictions
I try try try
And die die die
What the hell
Why not die?
'cause I now live
Wanna so live
Yet, death's not far

Tuesday, August 9, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Kerouac Series
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 11 August 2022

Dear Richard, a poem that expresses deep 'angst' of life and death. Very beautifully penned.......Top score

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Timber Koleden 01 July 2026

Thank you for sharing this all the way back in 2022!

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Richard Wlodarski 01 July 2026

You're very welcome, Timber. And thank you for reading this one; I had almost forgotten it!

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Timber Koleden 01 July 2026

This piece makes me think of all the internal frustrations many of us frequently feel in this world! It is a raw poem that really gives the reader the exact emotion which the writer is trying to express.

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Richard Wlodarski 01 July 2026

Love your positive constructive criticism, Timber! It validates for me the internal struggle that Jack Kerouac was experiencing throughout his life!

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Rob Lamberton 08 April 2026

There is a death that leads to life but we die daily!

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Richard Wlodarski 12 April 2026

And through our daily deaths...we are resurrected!

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Kevin Patrick 01 April 2024

Every word in this poem is 100% relatable, it is hard to mask ourselves the way others want us to, in order to survive. The last line just hit home that mortality is its own isolation. God be with you Richard so that you my continue your tasks of providing us these gems.

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Richard Wlodarski 06 April 2024

You've left me speechless, Kevin! So many many THX to you for your very insightful commentary! And for your last line...that means the world to me!

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Sandra Feldman 11 August 2022

Glad to see, dear Richard that things are better now. Your excellent poet-person deserves the best!

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