Keeping me this distant
Talking to me this sweet
Off you go; out you sign;
Transmission loss between?
Singing melodious songs
You keep silence this long
To know why, I am keen;
For it gives me immense pain
Touching me all this soft
You allow my heart to float,
It knows not where to rest
Nor where to find support
Painting picturesque lines
This swift on my canvas
You remain fingers crossed
That to me is a big loss
To resume talking soft
To sing sweeter songs
To paint portraits bright
Welcome back, my mate
Thanks a lot my mate!
I feel them all once more
For you’ve led my thirst
To those waters, in your yacht
Blessed is your voice,
My ears blessed are!
Blessed are your fingers,
Blessed is my heart!
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Ah! Lyrical, and again, a tongue in cheek tone! Audacious, yet subtly serious :) You have a natural flair, Sir!
i felt so much pain and yearning here, though a bit of satiric mood for lifting your spirit...couldn't say more...still ten.
very romantic, full of longing, tenderness, sensousness, at times trying to bring in humour to lighten the theme, through use of imagery. totally a different genre of romantic poems- a sincerity of emotions 10 Mamta
that poem brought out the true yearning of alover- the voice and touch of the near and dear realy makes us up-lovely
BLESSED IS THE HEART THAT LOVES...TRULY AND SINCERLY WITH NO MALICE... :) BFUL
Sir your lines bonded me. And the way you have expressed is truely making it a remarkable piece sir.... Thanks for sharing ric..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the poem is full of sensuousness.. you through your lines making a reader see the beauty, hear the melody of the tunes.., touching the heart.. your lines will never sign off to the reader's mind... written with classiness and literary opulence...