Falling asleep
Upon a park bench,
I saw you in a dream;
My best friend
Told me not to love you,
But I do.
The beauty of brevity..the fleeting dream, the imperishable moment captured forever in these few short lines. Regards, Sandra
A loving dream, that's nice Uriah. Love makes the world go round, so dream on. Love Ernestine XXX
Yes...do make sure before you give your heart. i have given mine and it is full of emotional turmoil since then. Good piece, you should be proud, <3
Reason and love are not always on the same side, 'tis true. But friendship is the basis of all good love, you know... So, be sure it's good before you give your heart... Always your friend, Q.E. : ]
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I am in awe of what you can do with so few words. Worthy of an anthology. Very beautiful. You are a great talent.