Not To Love You Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Not To Love You

Rating: 5.0


Falling asleep
Upon a park bench,
I saw you in a dream;
My best friend
Told me not to love you,
But I do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Will Barber 26 June 2006

I am in awe of what you can do with so few words. Worthy of an anthology. Very beautiful. You are a great talent.

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Sandra Fowler 25 June 2006

The beauty of brevity..the fleeting dream, the imperishable moment captured forever in these few short lines. Regards, Sandra

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Ernestine Northover 25 June 2006

A loving dream, that's nice Uriah. Love makes the world go round, so dream on. Love Ernestine XXX

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Guarded Heart 24 June 2006

Yes...do make sure before you give your heart. i have given mine and it is full of emotional turmoil since then. Good piece, you should be proud, <3

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Esther Leclerc 24 June 2006

Reason and love are not always on the same side, 'tis true. But friendship is the basis of all good love, you know... So, be sure it's good before you give your heart... Always your friend, Q.E. : ]

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