Nuclear bombs
Unclearly sky
Crying mothers
Lifeless bodies
Endless terrier
Away souls
Riot on the way
Wining babies
All are scared
Ready for help
I love the simplicity of this poem. Says all you need to say.
It is satisfying to see you're speaking out against violence. Let's keep on doing what we can to prevent any kind of nuclear war.
very direct and to the point effective powerful nice poem -Thomas
nice thing to talk about coz noone even like the idea of a nuke being launched at any city in the world like what happened in Japan.
A lot said in but a few, misspelt words. very impressive. well written!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I did not know what acrostic meant i have never heard of it even though I have written that type of poem. Yours is very good i like it well done young lady