O Island Of Peace Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

O Island Of Peace

Rating: 5.0


O ye tree sans shade,
Under thee no one rested,
Thine fruits no'ne tasted.

O path of love so lonely,
No one looked at thee,
Lost love seems thine fate.

O island of peace,
No one sought thy bliss,
And no one seems it to miss.

O birds of heaven,
Thou art the sole one
That come, nestle and return.
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Musings |37.03.2020|
Topic: tree, love, peace, birds

Monday, March 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,love,peace,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 30 March 2020

A well penned composition. Simply wonderful......10++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 March 2020

A magnificent piece of work sir! Appreciated and admired...10+++

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Kostas Lagos 30 March 2020

Excellent my friend! Outstanding!

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Anjandev Roy 31 March 2020

Fantastic write......lovely to read. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 April 2020

Path of love is so lonely but this love motivates life for higher realm. Due to love for each other and love for nest birds return home. Re-visiting this excellent poem I am very much glad.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 April 2020

To all the poets who visited and gave such beautiful feedback. Due Internet problems sorry id I can't individually acknowledge.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 April 2020

O island of peace, No one sought thy bliss, And no one seems it to miss..... outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 April 2020

Thanks poet KM for this uplifting feedback

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 April 2020

In this time of uncertainty, sometimes it is better to dwell in the island of peace. Wonderful triolet. Brilliantly penned.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 April 2020

sweet birdie poetry was waiting to see par aap ayein kyun naheen good bird catching POETRY

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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