O Jesus O Our Superman Comments

This is indeed a sublime prayer interspersed in this lovely song coming out of the heart of a true follower of Jesus. Thank you, Andalib. I quote: Do something please we are your fan Bring peace in the world; yes you can Yes you can Jesus yes you can

Lovely poem and also a divine song or prayer. I like it.

Great faith and hope you have portrayed in this poem. May Jesus answer all prayers and bring peace to this world. Fantastic poem, giving a great message to hope in Jesus. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

Great faith and hope you have portrayed in this poem! May Jesus answer all prayers and bring peace to this world. Fantastic poem giving a great message to hope in Jesus. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn

this very nice piece. I got d news of what tragedy had recently befallen the Philippines nd reading this now, it brings me linkage though this was submitted long before that happened nd again links to a scripture a read today (psalm 60: 2-5) . I feel something is going on- something real.

Jesus preached us the lesson n we are to follow him. a great write

oh Jesus who seats in the highest of the heaven and hear our prayers. Beautiful poem

he will come back one of these days, I also pray he will send peach on earth to all. good ink

A plea to Jesus to save our world from evil and to give us love and hope for a better future! Beautiful write!

If only half of the rest of the world felt this way think of how much better things could be. Great job Asif. Keep growing.

Beautiful lyrical poem, musical supplication in nature....nicely description of strong & firm believe...carry on