O' My Loving Jesus Poem by Amitava Sur

O' My Loving Jesus

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A holy heart with kindness and wisdom
Was boldly addressing them.
To think right, to do the right
And to know themselves.

He opened their eyes
Against orthodox beliefs
What was preached
To the people then.

How gallantly he was honored! !
Is known to all of us.
So brutally he was punished, so inhuman,
Forcibly they compelled him to kill himself,
By carrying his own cross, up to the tomb -
To be nailed to death.

The devil force, the then ruler
Made a saga against him.
So helpless, so undone then,
He had to Surrender to those beasts.

He is my loving Jesus
Innocent and bold -
Having no option left
Had to sacrifice his life.

Honesty was thus butchered
Publicly in a place! ! !

Oh' Jesus - my loving Jesus,
I just cannot take.
I always keep you
In the core of my heart.

With my uncontrolled tears in eyes
I love you my friend.

I don't like to see you
As my teacher or a living God.
I don't even separate you
By immortality, giving God's fame.
I rather feel your enormous pain
So cowardly and ruthlessly they did execute.


Your love for all and kindness
Is known to us all.
Love you, praise you
And keep you as my closest loving friend.

Could I sit with you alone
And have your touch of hand! ! !

Love you, praise you
And always keep you in my heart.
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Amatava (18.04.2014) 9-00 am
On Good Friday

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today is Good Friday, this day is celebrated with a feeling of holy day and fun. I ask myself as what is good in this Friday by knowing his brutal killing to be occurred just two days later? My heart cries only.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 07 May 2014

Yes loving Jesus died for our sins mankind can be so cruel...but he has won for he is in all our hearts..loved the love you show in the poem...regards

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Damian Cranney 18 April 2014

I like the sentiments expressed in this poem Amitava, you feel for the suffering Jesus went through and so refer to it. . But what you would like is a direct and personal friendship. If as we are told we are made in Gods image and likeness, that should be possible. A very good write.

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Valsa George 18 April 2014

When we look at Jesus's crucifixion from the human angle, this is how we feel. But remember, Christ was the son of God.... at once Man and God. If he wanted, he could have averted the crucifixion. But it was the will of God that His only son should die for the sins of the world... So we can say, his death was part of a divine scheme... Judas and the high priests just became instrumental in this great saga of sacrifice...! However Amitava, I am touched by your deep feeling for Jesus....! A moving write! !

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Patricia Grantham 18 April 2014

This poem tells of the crucifixion of Jesus Christ. He was wounded for our iniquities and bruised for our transgressions. Through Him we will have eternal life. Thank you for your eye opener this Good Friday morning. Well done.

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Practicing Poetess 03 October 2017

A moving and earnest poem, beautifully written. Wonderful poem for Easter.

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Allotey Abossey 10 June 2015

Truly speaking, you write well of Jesus, but the truth is he wouldn't like to be mourned, it was his destiny. From the angle you are coming from, Every thing you've said abt Jesus is right, he wouldn't even accept glory that's not due him. But there's a mystery abt Jesus that is revealed to the people of the book, that without absolute submission to the perfect will of God you may not see be revealed to you: that he's the son of God, savior of the world and the one that calls many into sonship.

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Heather Wilkins 05 April 2015

a beautiful picture of Jesus thanks for sharing this beautiful piece

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Amitava Sur 05 April 2015

Thank you Heather for loving this poem with your appreciation.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 December 2014

Nice poem Jesus(PBUH) He has been hidden in the arm of Almighty and readying to send bachk on earth again - what we call second coming thanks a lot

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 December 2014

Nice poem Jesus(PBUH) He has been hidden in the arm of Almighty and readying to send bachk on earth again - what we call second coming thanks a lot

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