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Wandering a way to live
Though the mind is in blues! !
A mild breeze is blowing over me
With a rush of fresh air! !
Silently I'm sitting alone
Enjoying blowing breeze
Embracing it I said ' O' my dear..
can you not take me to blow with you please?
Here, I cannot live any more
Being deserted from my sweet heart.
Can't find any reason to live
Being so alone and forlorn.
I'll roam around with you only,
And live a life like you …
I'll move around in rain and drought
Being sunken in dew.
O' my loving mild blowing breeze
You take me with you! !
As long as I'll live on this earth
Let me live only with you.'
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Amitava (18.9.2014)
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Excellent exquisite write. Flow of love blows like the melancholic soothing breeze.
Hello poet friend Amitave. I enjoyed this reflective poem, I could sense the desire in your words. I enjoyed, Loyd PS: Please check out my new book on Amazon or Barnes and Noble, Pumpkinny Tales. Thanks for your support.
Having lost a beloved spouse, a lover cannot paint his sorrow and grief in a manner better than this. A beautiful poem from the loving heart of great Amitava.............10
a beautiful poem well versed o my loving mild blowing breeze you take me with you as long as I'll live on this earth lwt me live only with you
Fervent desire blowing in the mind To be beside the blowing breeze so mild That carries freshness of air enlivening soul and mind......so sweet of you Amitavaji....this is as good as heaven
Beautiful poem yet painful one, each words that poured from heart, touching lines... O' my loving mild blowing breeze You take me with you! ! As long as I'll live on this earth Let me live only with you.' Feelings of loss especially when loneliness is felt and longing to be near the beloved. Beautiful presentation.
Intense desire to be with your loved one reflects with so much beauty in your poem. It is like when you close your eyes the breeze brings your love back to you in your silence and it flowers into loving poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very loving, heartfelt poem, Amitava. Melancholy and sad but, showing your total devotion to the one you love, a very beautiful, tender loving tribute to the love of your heart. An amazing woman, your Bandana, to hold your love forever, Amitava! ! Great poem, I love it. I give you a 10! !