Obliterate Obscurity Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Obliterate Obscurity

Rating: 5.0


J-oy
O-bliterates
Y-our
A-nguished
L-oneliness
A-nd
I-t
N-icely
E-rases

Q-uiver
U-ntil
I-t
J-ust
A-bates
N-ight's
O-bscurity

Topic: Birthday of Joyalaine S. Quijano (July 23)
Form: Vertical Monocrostic

Obliterate Obscurity
Thursday, August 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cheryl Tutaan 29 January 2019

Marvelous monocrostic, dear Bernard....10+++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 August 2018

Dear Bernard, Your birthday poems to so many people are so nice to read. You have a very generous heart that can hold the whole world within it. Every time i read your poems, i realise how important it is to be positive always. I learn a lot from your poems. I just read the poem written by Haidee - a tribute to you on your birthday. :) ..........10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 August 2018

Much thanks, Geeta..... The pleasure is always mine... You are one of the highly regarded writers on this site😊😊😊🙏🙏🙏

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 August 2018

A brilliant vertical mono-acrostic poem my friend! Thanks for sharing...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 August 2018

Thank you, Dillip. Your comment is well treasured🤓🤓🤓🙏🙏🙏

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