Observation Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Observation

Rating: 5.0


A candle burning is only wax,
Melting down to what it was
Before it entered a candle mold
Where do drips of substance go?

Air is thinner than sundry things
Into which are vanishing-
Somewhere else
Must be realer than here
Where things go
Than disappear...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
(De Va) 28 October 2011

great....I have been there, you know, where things go that are not here...smiles n blessings

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Amrit Rathi 08 June 2010

A great truth so subtly told! .....must be realer than here...Where things go that disappear...SIMPLY A GREAT POEM. I loved it10+ no doubt. Hope you would enjoy my poem MEDITATION...

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