Ode To George Floyd Poem by Ernesto Barca

Ode To George Floyd

Rating: 5.0


Ash clouds float
In scattered slants of light,
Like flies in a frozen breach,
Blankets of black cotton pad the ground
From ashes to ashes they preach.

So then, that's all we keep
From where life and flesh once stood,
Lie ashes now…we weep.
Blackens the streets this ash they wreak
Which tugs at our beaten souls,
Together as one their hearts they speak
To calmly these ashes extol.

Another one off the street they say,
And ask us why we grieve
I hope to see his dream one day
Where all men can freely breathe.

Tuesday, June 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: justice,racism,solidarity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 09 July 2020

A well executed poem of the day. Simply touching. Congrats on your featured piece...10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 July 2020

Another one off the street they say, And ask us why we grieve I hope to see his dream one day Where all men can freely breathe.......Superb written the ODE to George Floyd.......congrats....deserve 10+

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 July 2020

Nowadays George Floyd is such a name that no one will forget this easily, I think, even forgetfully no one will forget..... In literature, in newspaper, in air-media, in social working, in praying, in protesting in on line free lancing, in writing, in reading, in reciting.......everywhere and everytime nowadays this name becomes part and parcel! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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James G Brennan 09 July 2020

Great piece Ernesto. James.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 July 2020

From ashes to ashes they preach! ! ! But, let us reach out to the world with the muse of peace and love! ! Uplifting righteous morals without RACISM. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 09 July 2020

" Where all men can freely breathe? " A great tribute to the victim of racial discrimination. Well deserved poem of the day.

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Lyn Paul 09 July 2020

Thank you Ernesto. It’s taken a long long time but people are finally listening. All over the world.

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Kevin Patrick 09 July 2020

Ashes when their should breath a fire, a good poem highlighting the injustice of our systems

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 July 2020

Another one off the street they say, And ask us why we grieve I hope to see his dream one day Where all men can freely breathe. He could not breathe and he was crying out i cannot breath. the police brutality agains coloured people. tony

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Ruta Mohapatra 09 July 2020

Beautifully expressed, Ernesto! Congrats on poem of day!

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