Nay, I am no worshiper of nature
but as I am a bubble
floating on this earthen heaven
I just could not shake off
its aquatic inertia.
This gleeful festivity of my being
and this passionate lust for life
is the legacy of water.
Once as I took a deep draught
off the fountain of life
with an intense thirst,
today all through my body
flowing are the numerous streams.
In the pervading wilderness
of this sear earth
I am the itinerant colors
of the triumphant waters,
I am the bloom of life
blown out of the pollen of water
May I be the combatant child
arrived leaving the matrix of water
but since my very birth
this carpet of water
is the prayer-mat of mine.
You can call it aquatic complex-
have I no objection,
but why laying reckless blame
of worshiping inanimate nature?
its brilliant..... its creative... full of life! ! i love this poem u deserve a 100 % 10+++++
'You can call it aquatic comlex- have I no objection, but why laying reckless blame of worshipping inanimate nature? ' A beautiful composition. I love the last stanza most. Idea of the poem is very nice. Cheers.
this is amazing, i never would have thought about a poem on water. they way you write makes it awsome, i'd give it a ten easily
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Great lines nicely put together. A work of an intricate mind.
good job dear, simplicity makes a poem more beautiful and attractive..grace
i love how much u express things with ur words almost to make it like ur there! ! another great one! ! DLG
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow this was such a great poem. i really enjoyed this. great write