Oh Friend Ol' Ben…0307 Poem by saadat tahir
Oh Friend Ol' Ben…0307
Glittering, gleaming, fairly sighs.
Wrinkled, shriveled, wizened eyes.
Beware! Sham vibrant fetching ties.
Some so hiding monstrous lies.
Seen much verdure, autumn shades.
To greedy glee, gone gifted glades.
Tick tock dally! Oh, friend ol' Ben.
Thumbing noses? Since who knows when!
In dimensions, dreams, sentinel stands.
Stroked and cloaked by cheated hands.
Hogged up fair deceit of summer's lies.
Rutted paths that doom belies.
That spring in soul, to jejune dust.
Tossed and lost in salacious lust.
oft hasty pandered, inner eye.
Clueless wanders, mixt muddy sty.
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saadat tahir
27 june,10
Buraydah-KSA
Very nice and fluent poem. and thanks a lot for reading my poem.
loveeeeeee it..for a sec i felt like i'm in some kind of a fantasi movie lol that's a gd poem
This poem holds much character and emotion. A good read! ; D
Seen much verdure, autumn shades. To greedy glee, gone gifted glades. Beautiful lines. This composition has been made brilliant with the use of alliteration, imagery metaphor, rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I love the adjectives you have chosen, they create a beautiful image :)