Oh, God Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Oh, God

Rating: 5.0


When I am two hundred and ninety five,
no one will even know I was alive. That
my soul was once to be. And loved with
every part of me. No, no one on earth
will ever know. But in heaven, I hope,
my spirit will show.

Monday, October 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,life,love,melancholy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 01 October 2018

You will be still alive even beyond that time period beyond imagination. An interesting poem is beautifully penned. Keeping mind in God is the great. Thank you very much for sharing this poem...10

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Rebecca Navarre 05 October 2018

Thank you! .. Kumarmani, For your very beautifully kind reply! .. Your poetry speaks of God, nature, and life, that shines with inspiration, beauty, hope and light! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Richard Wlodarski 01 October 2018

Rebecca, you don't give yourself enough credit!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

I know you will always be remembered, Becca. The good words, deeds, acts and wisdom you imparted will defy your death. A great poem succinctly and wonderfully crafted.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2022

A beautiful poem written so beautifully, tenderly and with utmost humility.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2021

Absolutely wonderful!

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 October 2018

Becca, What I have quoted below is from Antony’s Speech, from Julius Caesar. So, you understand that what Shakespeare meant just the opposite. So there! You will be remembered by those who love poetry, love literature....love art....

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Rebecca Navarre 05 October 2018

Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, :) heh, for explaining didn't know. And Thank you for such a very beautiful comment! .. Your poetry holds beauty so bright, like the depths of the morning sunlight! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Unnikrishnan E S 01 October 2018

Hi Becca, The Bard has written “The evil that men do lives after them; The good is oft interred with their bones; ” So let it be Rebecca Naverra... You have been doing a lot of good by your lovely poems, which we cherish as the feast on ph. They most often abound in profound thoughts, are poignant and provocative... We thank you for all the good you do.... And may God be be with you always...

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Rebecca Navarre 05 October 2018

Again Goodness, Thank you! .. Unnikrishnan, For such an ever so inspiring and beautiful comment! .. Means a lot to me! .. Your poetry is so beautifully painted with such heart, detail and depth, you touch the readers soul! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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