Oh Tumble Weed Poem by Rob Lamberton

Oh Tumble Weed

Rating: 5.0

Blow away tumble weeds
Our garden cleansed by fire
Till Spring flowers bloom
Oh spring is coming soon
Oh spring is coming soon

Oh touch us again
We want to feel your soft breeze
Over and over
O'er our flowering garden
O'er our flowering garden

O' Oh make Spring rain
Our passionate garden green
Rainbow of passion

Wednesday, March 13, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: passion,rainbow,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 September 2025

I concur with the wonderful comments of M.J. Lemon on this brilliantly crafted poem with compelling images and great rhythm. I can see tumbleweeds blown away by the wind.

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M.J. Lemon 18 March 2024

Brilliant. I can see and hear those tumbleweeds rolling away, going so far away. Brilliant, Rob!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 March 2024

I thought I read I guess not. But the wait was sweet Bravo! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 March 2024

A colourful poem.... loved it

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2024

Very beautifully crafted. Enjoyed the flow and rhythm. Nice share.

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