The moment was too intimate to keep.
We had to make a compromise with dusk
To keep the blue from entering our bones.
The shadow of old feelings held us fast.
I think some things should never have been said
Over those cups of coffee that we shared.
The warmth of smoke brought all the longing back
To drink the landscape in each other's eyes.
Hello, Sandra! This poem takes my breath away. It's really wonderful.
wow, sandra this is really a powerful poem. i wish i have written it. cheers.
The poem creates nostalgic feelings in me! I would like to qote from Shelley's 'Skylark'; - 'We look before and after, And pine for what is not, Our sincerest laughter, - With some pain is fraught, Our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddeast thoughts ' For your poem 10+ -Raj Nandy
'The warmth of smoke brought all the longing back To drink the landscape in each other's eyes' i liked these expressions! ! ! ma'am! ! ! nice indeed... i really felt these lines..thanks for this one! ! ! with lots of love shan.
a warm poem carried scent of old days which filled by the coffee taste...loved it ..10++++..
feel the warmth of breathe........ a butterfly flutter within..........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Heres to old feelings... another beautiful poem... Sandra 10